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On a blissful summer day, Mr Goodwin decided to take Poppy for a beautiful walk along the Tamaki river. They were both enjoying the walk when suddenly a stranger walked by and took Poppy. When the stranger took Poppy Mr Goodwin was cross that he ran after the Stranger or should he say the afif. I tired to Catch him but he was to fast for me it felted like he was Usain Bolt but he was not because he had a hoodie on.

So Mr Goodwin said to himself i got a plan so he slow himself down and went back to has car. When Mr Goodwin went inside has car he called has bast friend because he a Spy he can track down anyone so that means he can track down Poppy. So i went to has fance House then Knock on has door. I felted that i was going to be rush by him. Then he Opened the door. Then Mr Goodwin said omg omg omg. Then he came out and said go in the van Mr Goodwin was so Nervous that has hand was Sweating then he said who is it then Mr Goowin said it Poppy my dog he got Stolen by a afif here is a Photo of the afif. I took when me and Poppy was walking today then he said i will do my bast to look for him.

Ok i said. So i went back home to get some sleep. But i Couldn't sleep at all. Because of Poppy i was dreaming about him. In my dream was me and Poppy walking at the park Suddenly aifi can and took Poppy. Wait a Minutes it the something that Happened today. So i just went to go and Watch Team Titans on skyTV after my friend called me and said your dog is in a Abandoned house with 5 guard blocking the door so i am come. So i went to my friends House and went to this Secret garage and inside was a Bulletproof truck and A truck with guns so we both took it and went on.

When we got there we set up the trap around the house then we went to the front door and took the 5 guard down but it was not easy but we took them down suddenly something Terrible Happened. Mr Goodwin bast friend went into has own trap.

No i said i am not Leaving you then he said go go and get Poppy then i said good Bye. then i went to go get Poppy. When i got there no one was with Poppy in Till the aifi jump on me then i took off has hoodie and guess who was it. It was Usain Bolt then i said why are you doing this then he said  because ilke dog. Then he went in my trap. Then i got Poppy back. After me and Poppy went home and watch team titans together then i said i miss you.        

        

       

my Monster

My Monster
WALT: Descriptive Writing

Write a sentence about the monster's face.
 My monster’s has a fat head

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 My monster’s has a fat ugly round head that's covered in a hairy noodle beard.

Write a sentence about the monster's body.
 It belly is hairy and Sweaty

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 It belly is hairy with dripping blood going down and sweaty noodle that like Disgusting

Write a sentence about the monster's personality.
 He’s one ugly monsters

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 He’s one ugly Disgusting dirty  monsters and has name was jeff who got Possessed by a Demon

My monster’s has a fat head One Terrible day a Person named Jeff was possessed by a demon. The demon told Jeff that he was going to be a monster and no one would like him even has mum and dad. So after he went he saw to himself I am stand going to live in a Normal Life.

After he told himself. he went to the mall to go Shopping Because he was Naked. Then he went to the shopping then the demon came and said you are going to be Hideous. And Have a fat ugly round head that's covered in a hairy noodle beard. And its belly is hairy with dripping blood going down and sweaty noodle that like Disgusting.

 
   

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