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Wednesday 16 October 2019

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https://get.pxhere.com/photo/beach-sea-coast-ocean-vacation-swimming-pool-lagoon-bay-leisure-resort-estate-caribbean-water-park-tropics-cape-1405013.jpgImage result for the rockone day at the mysterious forest me and Jordan saw this pool it looked like a living Shark was there. So me and Jordan went in the pool. After that me and Jordan saw Exodus and we told him to come and join us. Then we saw so many people that we told all of the people to come in the pool with us. But when we saw this thing it looked like it was coming. So as we got out there was one person. After we got out we saw  a life grand come out of nowhere. Then he was safe. The person said to the life grand thank you for saving me. But the shark was still here. Then Exodus call Dwayne Johnson to beat up the shark. Then Dwayne Johnson came and beat.           
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4 comments:

  1. Harmony@PES18 October 2019 at 12:34

    nice writing but you need to fix it cause Dwayne Johnson beat who

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  2. Cora18 October 2019 at 12:46

    hi Jezer, nice writing but next time remember to proofread be for you post your work

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  3. Jordan11 November 2019 at 11:09

    Hi jezer, I really like your writing. By the way next time proofread your writing next time. Dwayne Johnson is really strong because he can beat the shark up.I love it and keep up the good work. "is this your favourite story you've written?".

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