On friday pt england school have a picnic before we left school we gathered and listened to mr burt . when we arrived we dropped and hurried off to play . ering the day we play at the beach and at the park some people built castles .
You have used some really interesting words in your recount about the picnic - gathered, listened, hurried off. I hope you use these words again in your writing!
Did you have a swim at the picnic? I usually have a swim but I always get cold when I do!
Hi Jezer,
ReplyDeleteYou have used some really interesting words in your recount about the picnic - gathered, listened, hurried off. I hope you use these words again in your writing!
Did you have a swim at the picnic? I usually have a swim but I always get cold when I do!
From Ms Nalder